Then I did a cleaner version, with yet another try at the head:
　　然后我画了一个更清楚地版本，同时在头部作了另一个尝试:
图片二：

And then I decided I didn't like that head, and replaced it with one from the first page, adjusting the size and the angle:
　　然后我认为我不喜欢那个头部，并且用第一页的一个替代，还调整尺寸和角度:

图片三：




　　Now the next step will be to do a final cleanup, adding a flowered sundress(flowers, butterfly - get the picture?).
　　I'll post that cleanup next. By the way, the Pup is in the approximate pose of Thumper in the original.
　　现在，下一步是做一些最后的清洁，加一个花花夏装（花，蝴蝶——看到图片了？）
　　我将随后贴出那个清理的图片。顺便说一句，小狗的姿势是原图近似。

　　And then the cleanup. This is done with a #2 pencil, and a blue Col-erase pencil for the dress. I did a little fixing here and there, as you see, moving the butterfly, for instance, so she could more easily see it, and raising her left pigtail higher on her head.
　　下面是清理。这步使用#2铅笔和一个蓝色带橡皮的铅笔画衣服。我在一些地方做了小修改，你可以看出来，比如，移动了蝴蝶，这样她可以更容易地看着它，并且把她头上左边的猪尾巴提高一些。
图片四：